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Style Matters Workshop


Style Matters Workshop

We hold a 10-week long Brown Bag luncheon workshop series each semester. We examine faculty writing and work together to improve specific pieces of writing. 
                                        
Fall 2009, Mondays 12-1                                   
K
ristine Hansen (kristine_hansen@byu.edu)

276 MCKB                                                                Beth Hedengren (beth_hedengren@byu.edu)

 

Facilitator

Week

Reading

(In Style, by Joseph Williams)

Assignment

Beth and Kristine

Sept. 14

 

Lessons 1

Understanding Style

Submit a piece of writing from your discipline (not your own) that demonstrates good style. Choose something that might be published in a journal in your field. Why do you consider this document to be well written?

Beth

Sept.  21

 

Lessons 10 & 11

Coherence

 

Bring 1-2 pp of a piece of writing you are ready to polish.

Bring any examples you have noticed of particularly good or particularly bad style.

Kristine

Sept. 28

Lesson 2

Correctness

 

 

Bring 1-2 pp of a piece of writing you are ready to polish.

Bring any examples you have noticed of particularly good or particularly bad style.

Beth

Oct. 5

Lesson 3

Actions

 

Bring 1-2 pp of a piece of writing you are ready to polish.

Bring any examples you have noticed of particularly good or particularly bad style.

 

Oct. 12

No Class: WM Lunch

 

Kristine

Oct. 19

Lesson 4

Characters

 

 

 

Bring 1-2 pp of a piece of writing you are ready to polish.

Bring any examples you have noticed of particularly good or particularly bad style.

Beth

Oct. 26

Lesson 5

Cohesion and coherence

 

 

 

 

Bring 1-2 pp of a piece of writing you are ready to polish.

Bring any examples you have noticed of particularly good or particularly bad style.

Kristine

Nov. 2

Lesson 6

Emphasis

 

 

Bring 1-2 pp of a piece of writing you are ready to polish.

Bring any examples you have noticed of particularly good or particularly bad style.

Beth

Nov. 9

Lesson 7

 Concision

Bring 1-2 pp of a piece of writing you are ready to polish.

Bring any examples you have noticed of particularly good or particularly bad style.

Kristine

Nov. 16

Lessons 8 & 9

Shape and Elegance

 

Bring 1-2 pp of a piece of writing you are ready to polish.

Bring any examples you have noticed of particularly good or particularly bad style

 

Nov. 23

No class: Thanksgiving week

 

Beth and Kristine

Nov. 30

Lesson 12

Ethics

Workshop Review & Celebration!

 

Bring a transparency with a short passage that you have revised for improved style. Be prepared to explain what principles of style you used to revise.

 

 

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